prepositional phrases and an article

PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES

 

  1. The children in the grassy garden are playing football.
  2. The boys from Indonesia are studying about English literature every day.
  3. The girls in school area have problem with other students.
  4. The singers from USA are good singer in this concert.
  5. The young boy from Bandung looked at his room in the morning.

An article about something or someone

Yesung, Super Junior’s leader vocal

            Yesung is good singer from Korea. He has gold voice with his song “it has to be you”. He and Super Junior first debut in 2005. They are from SM Town Entertain and he is member of SUPER JUNIOR, SUPER JUNIOR K.R.Y, and SUPER JUNIOR-H (Happy). Yesung has beautiful voice so, he become leader vocal in his group. His single are it has to be you (OST. Cinderella’s step sister), and I love you (OST. President), waiting for you (OST. President), and I do. He and Super Junior will so show in Jakarta next month, 4 June. The concert will play about 2 hour in Plaza Senayan.

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3 thoughts on “prepositional phrases and an article

  1. Amila, this is a nice piece of work. It seems like you like Yesung very much 🙂
    Some issues you need to improve in your writing are:
    2) The boys from Indonesia are studying about English literature every day.
    4) The singers from USA are good
    singers in this concert.
    5) He does that activity every day? Then use present tense. If he did that only once, then use past tense.

  2. On your Yesung article, you need to work on the following issues:
    *) indefinite article –> a good singer; a gold voice; Yesung has a beautiful voice
    *) definite article –> leader vocal (should be ‘the leading vocal’)
    *) verb –> He and Super Junior’s first debut was in 2005; will perform in Jakarta
    *) plural –> 2 hours

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